Wednesday, June 17, 2009

The History

I will be given a power to change the history .I would like to change the Guinsaugon tragedy because many innocent people and many innocent babies are died because of that tragedy.Many farmers and other business was lost.Especially those people who lost their love ones or families.

2 comments:

  1. Grace Anne,
    I really like your selection of topic. You provide very good examples of how the community was effected. Examples always make an argument stronger.
    One suggestion for format, do not center your text, always keep it aligned to the left. Center alignment makes it more difficult to read.
    Again, your post is a little short but very good quality. Keep up the good work!

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  2. My comments are center aligned too! haha

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